GIRLS' MONACHOPSIS

aaa i love fennel's character design so muchh

why did this comfort me in a way i didnt know i needed 

:)

This game is genuinely amazing! It's really nice to have a story that centers on people like me, and I have or have seen my friends go through situations like this. 

The visual style really helps sell the way they are broken but together. It's like the set design feels like something out of a horror film while the characters are living though it together.

The way the characters try to shield and comfort each other from the pain that the world bombards us with is really touching. These characters genuinely feel like a family.

10/10 game I loved all of it. I'm really hope that you continue to make games because this is one of the best pieces of art I've read in a long time.

1.Game is absolutely amazing, better than expected.

2.It actually made me shed a tear. the story and lore behind this is really touching.

Great game!

loved every minute of this story!! weird trans girls forever!

very sweet story that resonated a lot with me. i <3 burnout trans girls

It was fine but not much of a game

of all the games that were submitted to the menhara vn jam, this one genuinely feels the most like it had no idea how to do and say what it sought out to do. It's sole strength is that it's bizarre. It can derail dialogue and start making it's characters speak as if the entire cast are shitpost homunculi. I dont believe that this is an immoral piece of propaganda like a lot of social media guys are saying, nor do I believe it is abyss fiction, but it really does feel like it exists for a culture of Lain posters. It struggles to even feel sincere which makes it's moments where the author wants to introduce you to their values unabashedly feel empty.

me parece de mal gusto, que tengas que recurrir tirarle odio a otro juego para promocionar el tuyo.  dejando eso de lado, me gustaron mucho los diseños de personajes  

I really enjoyed this. The vibes were immaculate. As someone who's been in a similar situation, this really reached me and also caused me to feel a kind of stress I haven't felt in a long time (positive). The art is gorgeous. Also always excited to see my favorite engine put to use <3 The art, writing, and music all work in harmony to make something beautiful. What a wonderful vn

2/5 wish this was better but there’s a lack of even knowing how to write characters bouncing back and forth and make what does work highlight it’s premise. The clumsy pathos does not work on me.

This hit really well. The characters are developed just enough to let you get a feel for who they are and how to relate to them, without getting too wordy about. Very much a show more than tell story and I appreciate it for that.

I actually live in a group household that works a lot like this.

:)

really nice. love the characters and the art

Now, this right here?
This is a great VN~

I absolutely adore the art: Not only are the backgrounds and CGs gorgeous, but all of the characters have completely distinct designs and appearances that are pretty much perfectly matched to their personalities~

Relatedly, the character writing in this VN well and truly shines!  I could feel the pain, desperation, and wretchedness of the characters as my own, heheheh.  I also greatly appreciated the unflinching exploration of how the girls coped with the separation from their sister, how differently yet similarly the same trauma affected them~

Splendid work!  I'll be keeping an eye out for your future work, heheh~

a broken doggy (me) played this during a really stressful time in its life and really connected to the characters in it, especially with the overarching feeling of "this can't be normal but it feels nice." i recommended this cool thing to all the cool femthings because i want them to know there's creatures out there like us, irl and in media. thank u for this art piece :]

yea. this one's really good. one of the characters had my name and so it felt a little weird to read - but it's good when things hit home like that. means it was "made up out of real stuff," as they say.

maybe it's okay to cling together. it doesn't have to be forever... but it could be for long enough to last.

anyways, thanks for the game!! very nice work. i liked "sisters in purgatory" a normal amount. i wanna play that one...

ABSOULTELY ADORE

upon  closing the window   my body was filled with something overwhelming (probably emotions but it's not clear which ones exactly) and i watched in third person while it had a fit on the bed. 10/10

I loved this so much. This was so beautiful and I love these sisters.

I loved every minute of this! Thank you so much for making this! It really resonated with my weird trans girl brain c:

good shit... you stylize things so nicely! luv ur art and ur diverse designs. This shit is so real... 

really sweet. i don't know if it's good to be this way either, but i too want to believe.

goddd I wish that were me

(Amazing game and INCREDIBLE soundtrack!!)

This is a really good game.  I've had moments like all of these characters, holy crap do i miss making bfast for my roomies.  We weren't all a polycule, a couple of us dated, but it felt like this.  I feel the most like dahlia nowadays, and its lonely sometimes without them, but living like fennel just got too precarious and messed up for me.  Really good game

Also, i remember how much weed i used to smoke

This was a really sad yet sweet story, it feels so personal and that's a big part of why it's so captivating. This is a short story that exists because it was poured out of how someone feels, and the art carries that vibe too :)

This game feels like it was extracted straight from my brain stem :3 There is so much realness in everything, and it's so great

Holy shit that was so good! You're really talented!

Sweet game, I loved the art and musics !!!

в их глазах читается ужас и разочарование в мире

This is where yummy treats are found

Seriously though, I really loved this! Great art and character designs, and the ending made me a little teary eyed. I spent such a short amount of time with these girls but I love them so much!

this is very good

This game is absolutely stunningly beautiful. It's made me cry and my heart twist and twist thank you so much for making this thank you