everyone knows visual novels that prominently feature gay women having kinky sex with one another is nothing more than a ruse to mask the life changing existential shit you will read
This game is genuinely amazing! It's really nice to have a story that centers on people like me, and I have or have seen my friends go through situations like this.
The visual style really helps sell the way they are broken but together. It's like the set design feels like something out of a horror film while the characters are living though it together.
The way the characters try to shield and comfort each other from the pain that the world bombards us with is really touching. These characters genuinely feel like a family.
10/10 game I loved all of it. I'm really hope that you continue to make games because this is one of the best pieces of art I've read in a long time.
of all the games that were submitted to the menhara vn jam, this one genuinely feels the most like it had no idea how to do and say what it sought out to do. It's sole strength is that it's bizarre. It can derail dialogue and start making it's characters speak as if the entire cast are shitpost homunculi. I dont believe that this is an immoral piece of propaganda like a lot of social media guys are saying, nor do I believe it is abyss fiction, but it really does feel like it exists for a culture of Lain posters. It struggles to even feel sincere which makes it's moments where the author wants to introduce you to their values unabashedly feel empty.
me parece de mal gusto, que tengas que recurrir tirarle odio a otro juego para promocionar el tuyo. dejando eso de lado, me gustaron mucho los diseños de personajes
I really enjoyed this. The vibes were immaculate. As someone who's been in a similar situation, this really reached me and also caused me to feel a kind of stress I haven't felt in a long time (positive). The art is gorgeous. Also always excited to see my favorite engine put to use <3 The art, writing, and music all work in harmony to make something beautiful. What a wonderful vn
2/5 wish this was better but there’s a lack of even knowing how to write characters bouncing back and forth and make what does work highlight it’s premise. The clumsy pathos does not work on me.
This hit really well. The characters are developed just enough to let you get a feel for who they are and how to relate to them, without getting too wordy about. Very much a show more than tell story and I appreciate it for that.
I actually live in a group household that works a lot like this.
I absolutely adore the art: Not only are the backgrounds and CGs gorgeous, but all of the characters have completely distinct designs and appearances that are pretty much perfectly matched to their personalities~
Relatedly, the character writing in this VN well and truly shines! I could feel the pain, desperation, and wretchedness of the characters as my own, heheheh. I also greatly appreciated the unflinching exploration of how the girls coped with the separation from their sister, how differently yet similarly the same trauma affected them~
Splendid work! I'll be keeping an eye out for your future work, heheh~
a broken doggy (me) played this during a really stressful time in its life and really connected to the characters in it, especially with the overarching feeling of "this can't be normal but it feels nice." i recommended this cool thing to all the cool femthings because i want them to know there's creatures out there like us, irl and in media. thank u for this art piece :]
yea. this one's really good. one of the characters had my name and so it felt a little weird to read - but it's good when things hit home like that. means it was "made up out of real stuff," as they say.
maybe it's okay to cling together. it doesn't have to be forever... but it could be for long enough to last.
anyways, thanks for the game!! very nice work. i liked "sisters in purgatory" a normal amount. i wanna play that one...
upon closing the window my body was filled with something overwhelming (probably emotions but it's not clear which ones exactly) and i watched in third person while it had a fit on the bed. 10/10
This is a really good game. I've had moments like all of these characters, holy crap do i miss making bfast for my roomies. We weren't all a polycule, a couple of us dated, but it felt like this. I feel the most like dahlia nowadays, and its lonely sometimes without them, but living like fennel just got too precarious and messed up for me. Really good game
Lemme just start with how this game made me create an account after YEARS of playing random indie games and saying nothing. This game hit home real hard, REAL hard. I've felt these exact motions of emotions through life's rougher times and let me tell you, the rawness of everything and how everyone interacts is so freaking real. I saw a little too much of myself in everyone, and when i got hit by the panel of Fennel telling us to stay alive and how she cant lose anyone else, i just cried for the rest of my time playing because I've been both people in that scene time and time again and seeing it done so accurately.
I myself am a writer who uses the experiences I've had, especially ones like these to make my work as quality as possible, and that's what it feels like was done here. If you didn't then my days are you talented beyond belief, and if you did I'd like to just say I share in a lot of these feelings and experiences.
thank you for this game, it literally got me over a writing stump i was in while also making me cry for 2 hours. You rock, keep working!
also that hashbrown breakdown happend to me irl T-T.
This was a really sad yet sweet story, it feels so personal and that's a big part of why it's so captivating. This is a short story that exists because it was poured out of how someone feels, and the art carries that vibe too :)
This is an impressive RPG Maker visual novel about a kind of trans polycule. The game captures the cadence of Discord conversations: people get horny, angry, sad, and repeat the same dialog over and over again without knowing how much this repetition puts them in a kind of purgatory state. It felt like a game that came from the heart of someone who’s seen this stuff happen a lot.
Seriously though, I really loved this! Great art and character designs, and the ending made me a little teary eyed. I spent such a short amount of time with these girls but I love them so much!
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complete roller coaster of emotions and I'm genuinely upset I only have a horny porn account to leave this comment with.
i loved this! I felt like it was made for me LOL
aaa i love fennel's character design so muchh
why did this comfort me in a way i didnt know i needed
:)
Was looking for something to jill to but uhhh... Yeah I don't think I can cum to this
cool game tho, love the music and the art
understandable, have a great day
everyone knows visual novels that prominently feature gay women having kinky sex with one another is nothing more than a ruse to mask the life changing existential shit you will read
This game is genuinely amazing! It's really nice to have a story that centers on people like me, and I have or have seen my friends go through situations like this.
The visual style really helps sell the way they are broken but together. It's like the set design feels like something out of a horror film while the characters are living though it together.
The way the characters try to shield and comfort each other from the pain that the world bombards us with is really touching. These characters genuinely feel like a family.
10/10 game I loved all of it. I'm really hope that you continue to make games because this is one of the best pieces of art I've read in a long time.
1.Game is absolutely amazing, better than expected.
2.It actually made me shed a tear. the story and lore behind this is really touching.
Great game!
loved every minute of this story!! weird trans girls forever!
very sweet story that resonated a lot with me. i <3 burnout trans girls
It was fine but not much of a game
of all the games that were submitted to the menhara vn jam, this one genuinely feels the most like it had no idea how to do and say what it sought out to do. It's sole strength is that it's bizarre. It can derail dialogue and start making it's characters speak as if the entire cast are shitpost homunculi. I dont believe that this is an immoral piece of propaganda like a lot of social media guys are saying, nor do I believe it is abyss fiction, but it really does feel like it exists for a culture of Lain posters. It struggles to even feel sincere which makes it's moments where the author wants to introduce you to their values unabashedly feel empty.
me parece de mal gusto, que tengas que recurrir tirarle odio a otro juego para promocionar el tuyo. dejando eso de lado, me gustaron mucho los diseños de personajes
I really enjoyed this. The vibes were immaculate. As someone who's been in a similar situation, this really reached me and also caused me to feel a kind of stress I haven't felt in a long time (positive). The art is gorgeous. Also always excited to see my favorite engine put to use <3 The art, writing, and music all work in harmony to make something beautiful. What a wonderful vn
2/5 wish this was better but there’s a lack of even knowing how to write characters bouncing back and forth and make what does work highlight it’s premise. The clumsy pathos does not work on me.
This hit really well. The characters are developed just enough to let you get a feel for who they are and how to relate to them, without getting too wordy about. Very much a show more than tell story and I appreciate it for that.
I actually live in a group household that works a lot like this.
:)
really nice. love the characters and the art
uhhhhh... uhhh... can i get a.. uhh can i get a little sister with no pickles please...? and a large coke
it's me i'm the little sister with no pickles
Now, this right here?
This is a great VN~
I absolutely adore the art: Not only are the backgrounds and CGs gorgeous, but all of the characters have completely distinct designs and appearances that are pretty much perfectly matched to their personalities~
Relatedly, the character writing in this VN well and truly shines! I could feel the pain, desperation, and wretchedness of the characters as my own, heheheh. I also greatly appreciated the unflinching exploration of how the girls coped with the separation from their sister, how differently yet similarly the same trauma affected them~
Splendid work! I'll be keeping an eye out for your future work, heheh~
a broken doggy (me) played this during a really stressful time in its life and really connected to the characters in it, especially with the overarching feeling of "this can't be normal but it feels nice." i recommended this cool thing to all the cool femthings because i want them to know there's creatures out there like us, irl and in media. thank u for this art piece :]
yea. this one's really good. one of the characters had my name and so it felt a little weird to read - but it's good when things hit home like that. means it was "made up out of real stuff," as they say.
maybe it's okay to cling together. it doesn't have to be forever... but it could be for long enough to last.
anyways, thanks for the game!! very nice work. i liked "sisters in purgatory" a normal amount. i wanna play that one...
ABSOULTELY ADORE
upon closing the window my body was filled with something overwhelming (probably emotions but it's not clear which ones exactly) and i watched in third person while it had a fit on the bed. 10/10
I loved this so much. This was so beautiful and I love these sisters.
I loved every minute of this! Thank you so much for making this! It really resonated with my weird trans girl brain c:
good shit... you stylize things so nicely! luv ur art and ur diverse designs. This shit is so real...
really sweet. i don't know if it's good to be this way either, but i too want to believe.
goddd I wish that were me
(Amazing game and INCREDIBLE soundtrack!!)
This is a really good game. I've had moments like all of these characters, holy crap do i miss making bfast for my roomies. We weren't all a polycule, a couple of us dated, but it felt like this. I feel the most like dahlia nowadays, and its lonely sometimes without them, but living like fennel just got too precarious and messed up for me. Really good game
Also, i remember how much weed i used to smoke
Lemme just start with how this game made me create an account after YEARS of playing random indie games and saying nothing. This game hit home real hard, REAL hard. I've felt these exact motions of emotions through life's rougher times and let me tell you, the rawness of everything and how everyone interacts is so freaking real. I saw a little too much of myself in everyone, and when i got hit by the panel of Fennel telling us to stay alive and how she cant lose anyone else, i just cried for the rest of my time playing because I've been both people in that scene time and time again and seeing it done so accurately.
I myself am a writer who uses the experiences I've had, especially ones like these to make my work as quality as possible, and that's what it feels like was done here. If you didn't then my days are you talented beyond belief, and if you did I'd like to just say I share in a lot of these feelings and experiences.
thank you for this game, it literally got me over a writing stump i was in while also making me cry for 2 hours. You rock, keep working!
also that hashbrown breakdown happend to me irl T-T.
The hash browns were so many feels 🧡
This was a really sad yet sweet story, it feels so personal and that's a big part of why it's so captivating. This is a short story that exists because it was poured out of how someone feels, and the art carries that vibe too :)
This game feels like it was extracted straight from my brain stem :3 There is so much realness in everything, and it's so great
This is an impressive RPG Maker visual novel about a kind of trans polycule. The game captures the cadence of Discord conversations: people get horny, angry, sad, and repeat the same dialog over and over again without knowing how much this repetition puts them in a kind of purgatory state. It felt like a game that came from the heart of someone who’s seen this stuff happen a lot.
Thanks for making the game.
Yes! It happens over, and over, and over. That might just be life sometimes, but yes omg
thank you for describing my game better than i can sdfdfgjggffgkghghkgh
Wish she left and became independent
she should be more codependent actually
Holy shit that was so good! You're really talented!
Sweet game, I loved the art and musics !!!
в их глазах читается ужас и разочарование в мире
This is where yummy treats are found
Seriously though, I really loved this! Great art and character designs, and the ending made me a little teary eyed. I spent such a short amount of time with these girls but I love them so much!
this is very good