Symbiosis! Yes!! The interplay between the sadist and masochist! You got to the beautiful heart of the matter with targeted intensity. I loved this so much. I will be holding my breath for more from you! Thank you!
omggg this was amazing i love your work so much ive been excited for girls symbiosis for a while now :333 ive never gone "shes just like me fr" so many times in a story before
Girl's Symbiosis boasts striking art and music, intense scenarios, and fascinating dynamics in its short playtime. If you like blood and are seeking some toxic girls entwining with one another outside of typically accepted norms, this is the one for you!
Your art is tremendously compelling as always, extremely expressive and emotional. you have a knack for honing in on the essence of a feeling and conveying it through your linework. the music was great, and the story was very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.
A masterclass in making even an absolutely fucked relationship seem desirable by comparison. Are they good for each other? Shrug! But do they fit wonderfully together? Absolutely! It truly lives up to the name symbiosis!
The writing and art were breathtaking all throughout, and I knew from Mill's introduction cg that this was going to be a striking story.
thank you! their relationship might be kind of evil in a lot of ways but it is "what happened" and there are a lot of reasons we end up at this point. in a sense, they are good for each other. i'm happy you enjoyed it.
Now THAT'S toxic. Great characterization you created a deeply broken girl without her feeling insincere or tropey. Very enjoyable to read something that fits this much life into its characters within only 11,000 words.
Learning about this project and getting to experience has been an emotional rollercoaster of self discovery for me. very good work. thank u so much for sharing. i feel like my soul has been cleaned out. it was very cathartic and sweet at the end, I like that ember like. got therapy before going back to her murder gf. the painful twinge of sapphic yearning has been lit in my heart
thank u... i wanted to make her coming back to mill feel more painful after the fact, but they are simply built for each other like a car wrapped around a tree after a crash.
I really feel like Ember was pushed away as a person, deprived of the thing she needed most and neglected to the point where she'll seek love even from dangerous people when shown some affection.. Absolutely loved this game tho, please keep up the good work <3!
Edit: I'm assuming you mean the content warnings. There's no switch for anything like that in the game. If you think any of them would be upsetting to read, I would advise skipping this one, sorry.
its the most messy a toxic yuri entry can get, in all the right ways. ember's relationship with weakness is probably my favorite facet of this story, as well as the most heartbreaking. it's an indulgence that's killing her, it's something to get by, it's a way to survive. a story about the intoxicating allure of damage, and being damaged.
I've never read a work that made me feel more hungry than this one. Truly wonderful. This is going to sit in the back of my mind for quite a while and I welcome it there.
wow. that was awesome. i loved ember and milicent's dynamic, it really got me thinking about my own blorbos. the music was great, it absolutely stood out as a high point of this entry and i couldn't help but love milicent's red-eye portrait as a campy anime style rpg conversation gimmick.
Absolutely incredible work, the art is so polished and well executed.
When I went into this I was expecting something far more toxic and while the doll is a fucking disaster, I honestly found their relationship to be quite cute. I also really loved the expressions you gave them, Millicent in particular had some excellent imposing and frightening ones.
God it's just so peak, I'm gonna be thinking about this one for a while. Excellent work.
Thank you very kindly. I did end up feeling like it was less evil than I set out to make it, even though if you described the events of the game it would sound utterly horrific. I'm glad their relationship came off as cute in the end.
Such beautiful writing and tiny details that make you think. Stunning game and story! I would love to see more, either with the same girls or a new story, but please don't stop writing🩷
altered me in ways that will likely only become clear many months from now. my outlook on life is ever so slightly changed. this work has left me a different person
Lunapeaker dropped again and I'm so thankful, this was AMAZING. Ember is quite the understandable, yet tragically broken little girlthing. The kinda girl I wanna see smile and find joy and be alright, and, one could say that did happen? In a twisted sort of way. I don't know if I can say for sure, but I know that I love her. She's adorable, and I admit I didn't actually expect her journey to turn out the way it did (I expected way worse!) With the type of girl that I am, I'm not surprised I could relate, but still, amazingly written lady...
Millicent on the other hand is plain awesome. Coolest vampire character I've seen in a while and I mean it!!!!! Her appearance, specifically, is so well designed and distinct to me, I love that she's got cool ass fucking dreads, is tall, pretty, able to be beautifully feminine while simultaneously exuding a butchy (futchy?) charm as well... She's also got some insanely shaky morals, but that's what we're here for anyways. The dynamic between her and Ember, their synergy, it works scarily well, and without spoilers, I gotta say the game diligently proves that with astounding success, it's that special kind of symbiosis that only manifests itself in relationships such as theirs. And that I adore.
I also just want to say that I'm guilty too, I giggled and felt my face heating up at certain moments while reading this, I audibly said "ohmygosh >w<" and wiggled my hands up and down because I found some moments cute, and I feel that I wasn't supposed to, but I simply loved these characters to death, I lovelovelove ur art and writing Miss, thank you for the food!!!!
Thank you very much for the kind words, you're welcome. I'm very happy Millicent and her dynamic with Ember was enjoyable. Mill will take good care of her new Doll.
I love the characterization of a vampire who considers herself as the lesser of two evils. Like yeah, there are worse things that could happen to you than getting your arm ripped open and your blood sucked, but that doesn't mean she's doing anyone a favor! I think it's funny how ember keeps getting drugged when it's so unnecessary. Mill and that other girl could have just told it to do whatever while sober and it wouldn't have changed anything. The sad reality of the sub that won't let itself say no. TWISTED STUFF! I likes it! Ooh also, I really like now the display names keep changing at the beginning before anyone is properly named. Very cute/ funny.
I don't like it. I LOVE it. I'm obsessed with it. THIS relates to me quite a lot and the two protagonists are absolutely a match made in hell (affectionately speaking).
The VN has interesting themes that were explored very nicely and I simply adore the art and the character designs as a whole. Love your works, will be following for more.
What a game. I knew I was gonna get something pretty good since I liked your previous title exploring some interesting themes, but this one explores themes that feel more relevant to me. The two protagonists are really compelling characters, and the art is just awesome.
Gonna follow your work for real now. This was unbelievably good.
i loved this, it was a lot more reassuring than i expected based on the content warnings. i really liked millicent (she has some great expressions; love how she goes between being imposing and red-eyed and then she actually gets a little blushy in that last cg haha), and ember was an interesting protag. for somebody with no sense of self-preservation it felt kind of inspiring seeing her persevere despite Everything (also liked that moment where she managed to make millicent feel unsure of herself, even if it only lasted a little while).
love the art, the presentation, and the music choices were great too. i feel like you packed so much into a short wordcount and it was very emotionally resonant, i really enjoyed it!
HOTTT HOTTT HOTTT i loved it, millicent is a really compelling character and i adore the complexity of her showcased in the span of 11k words, ember, too, is an interesting character and so cute lol. like a disaster you cannot look away from--ember was engaging in that way. im a huge sucker for relationships where two people who seem really different actually have some commonality and i was definitely getting that vibe here. i also really like how emotionally evocative the writing was, you have a really good sense of word choice. i was looking forward to this one as soon as you started posting previews of the art and it turned out so good <3 !!
Oh this game is AMAZING! The artstyle and general vibes of the game compliment the writing perfectly, and I loved how the ending tied into the theme of symbiosis. Millicent's gonna be living in my head rent free for a long time.
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Symbiosis! Yes!! The interplay between the sadist and masochist! You got to the beautiful heart of the matter with targeted intensity. I loved this so much. I will be holding my breath for more from you! Thank you!
This was a really intense read. I kept feeling taken aback by how much damage Ember was willing to take, and how much she wanted to take it
omggg this was amazing i love your work so much ive been excited for girls symbiosis for a while now :333 ive never gone "shes just like me fr" so many times in a story before
Girl's Symbiosis boasts striking art and music, intense scenarios, and fascinating dynamics in its short playtime. If you like blood and are seeking some toxic girls entwining with one another outside of typically accepted norms, this is the one for you!
Your art is tremendously compelling as always, extremely expressive and emotional. you have a knack for honing in on the essence of a feeling and conveying it through your linework. the music was great, and the story was very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.
thank you death.... happy some of those feelings came through... really glad you enjoyed it >.<
played your game. youre such a creature. it looks gorgeus every scene. thats the stuff
thank you nadia... wahh..... happy you liked it >.<
What a lovely and bloody ride!
A masterclass in making even an absolutely fucked relationship seem desirable by comparison. Are they good for each other? Shrug! But do they fit wonderfully together? Absolutely! It truly lives up to the name symbiosis!
The writing and art were breathtaking all throughout, and I knew from Mill's introduction cg that this was going to be a striking story.
thank you! their relationship might be kind of evil in a lot of ways but it is "what happened" and there are a lot of reasons we end up at this point. in a sense, they are good for each other. i'm happy you enjoyed it.
Now THAT'S toxic. Great characterization you created a deeply broken girl without her feeling insincere or tropey. Very enjoyable to read something that fits this much life into its characters within only 11,000 words.
thank you, happy it felt authentic ^^
Learning about this project and getting to experience has been an emotional rollercoaster of self discovery for me. very good work. thank u so much for sharing. i feel like my soul has been cleaned out. it was very cathartic and sweet at the end, I like that ember like. got therapy before going back to her murder gf. the painful twinge of sapphic yearning has been lit in my heart
thank u... i wanted to make her coming back to mill feel more painful after the fact, but they are simply built for each other like a car wrapped around a tree after a crash.
I really feel like Ember was pushed away as a person, deprived of the thing she needed most and neglected to the point where she'll seek love even from dangerous people when shown some affection.. Absolutely loved this game tho, please keep up the good work <3!
Thank you ... Glad this aspect of ember comes through. Mill will take good care of her new doll.
This is literally better than most movies I watch!! I really liked this, can’t wait for more like this, or maybe even a sequel!
Very kind, thank you...
No problem!
Please make an Android version
It was good and concerningly a little relatable but I still like this game. P L E A S E Make a sequel!
Thank you. I'm not sure how I feel about sequels in general, but I like these characters and I tend to bring across themes I like into my other works.
Pretty good, I enjoyed it. Nice art. Thank you. 😊
thank you! glad u enjoyed it....
😨👍
Loved the game! Cant wait to see what else you make
thank u... i'm excited to keep creating
Can we turn some of these off or...?
What do you mean?
Edit: I'm assuming you mean the content warnings. There's no switch for anything like that in the game. If you think any of them would be upsetting to read, I would advise skipping this one, sorry.
This shit was fire, thanks for getting me into yuri. (Mill's design was great)
one of the coolest parts for me was the opening scene where mills name kept changing based off of embers perception of her. that was tuff as fuck
Thank you, glad to hear you liked it.
if i want to read so much i buy a book.
You've never bought a damn book in your life let's be real here friend.
power x weakness
its the most messy a toxic yuri entry can get, in all the right ways. ember's relationship with weakness is probably my favorite facet of this story, as well as the most heartbreaking. it's an indulgence that's killing her, it's something to get by, it's a way to survive. a story about the intoxicating allure of damage, and being damaged.
Thank you emphatically for the kind words. This is exactly what I wanted to convey and I'm glad it comes through.
I've never read a work that made me feel more hungry than this one. Truly wonderful. This is going to sit in the back of my mind for quite a while and I welcome it there.
Thank you for this. Hunger is very central to what I wanted to write about. The venn diagram overlap between "food" and "girl" is an interesting spot.
wow. that was awesome. i loved ember and milicent's dynamic, it really got me thinking about my own blorbos. the music was great, it absolutely stood out as a high point of this entry and i couldn't help but love milicent's red-eye portrait as a campy anime style rpg conversation gimmick.
Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed.
Absolutely incredible work, the art is so polished and well executed.
When I went into this I was expecting something far more toxic and while the doll is a fucking disaster, I honestly found their relationship to be quite cute. I also really loved the expressions you gave them, Millicent in particular had some excellent imposing and frightening ones.
God it's just so peak, I'm gonna be thinking about this one for a while. Excellent work.
Thank you very kindly. I did end up feeling like it was less evil than I set out to make it, even though if you described the events of the game it would sound utterly horrific. I'm glad their relationship came off as cute in the end.
Such beautiful writing and tiny details that make you think. Stunning game and story! I would love to see more, either with the same girls or a new story, but please don't stop writing🩷
Thank you so much. I'll do my best to keep going.
altered me in ways that will likely only become clear many months from now. my outlook on life is ever so slightly changed. this work has left me a different person
Thank you for sharing. I'm happy it could have an impact. I hope it's for the better.
Enjoyed what i read
Thanks for the experience you have great work!
Much appreciated. You're welcome.
this game made me cry in a good way, thank you
That's very touching, thank you for sharing. You're welcome.
THIS WAS SO GOOD GRGHERWSJGJHERSAGJESARJHEG
need need need need need oh my FUCKING god
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Lunapeaker dropped again and I'm so thankful, this was AMAZING.
Ember is quite the understandable, yet tragically broken little girlthing. The kinda girl I wanna see smile and find joy and be alright, and, one could say that did happen? In a twisted sort of way. I don't know if I can say for sure, but I know that I love her. She's adorable, and I admit I didn't actually expect her journey to turn out the way it did (I expected way worse!) With the type of girl that I am, I'm not surprised I could relate, but still, amazingly written lady...
Millicent on the other hand is plain awesome. Coolest vampire character I've seen in a while and I mean it!!!!! Her appearance, specifically, is so well designed and distinct to me, I love that she's got cool ass fucking dreads, is tall, pretty, able to be beautifully feminine while simultaneously exuding a butchy (futchy?) charm as well... She's also got some insanely shaky morals, but that's what we're here for anyways. The dynamic between her and Ember, their synergy, it works scarily well, and without spoilers, I gotta say the game diligently proves that with astounding success, it's that special kind of symbiosis that only manifests itself in relationships such as theirs. And that I adore.
I also just want to say that I'm guilty too, I giggled and felt my face heating up at certain moments while reading this, I audibly said "ohmygosh >w<" and wiggled my hands up and down because I found some moments cute, and I feel that I wasn't supposed to, but I simply loved these characters to death, I lovelovelove ur art and writing Miss, thank you for the food!!!!
Thank you very much for the kind words, you're welcome. I'm very happy Millicent and her dynamic with Ember was enjoyable. Mill will take good care of her new Doll.
I love the characterization of a vampire who considers herself as the lesser of two evils. Like yeah, there are worse things that could happen to you than getting your arm ripped open and your blood sucked, but that doesn't mean she's doing anyone a favor! I think it's funny how ember keeps getting drugged when it's so unnecessary. Mill and that other girl could have just told it to do whatever while sober and it wouldn't have changed anything. The sad reality of the sub that won't let itself say no. TWISTED STUFF! I likes it! Ooh also, I really like now the display names keep changing at the beginning before anyone is properly named. Very cute/ funny.
Thank you very much. I'm glad Millicent's pragmatism and Ember's torture doll disposition was enjoyable to read....
I don't like it. I LOVE it. I'm obsessed with it. THIS relates to me quite a lot and the two protagonists are absolutely a match made in hell (affectionately speaking).
The VN has interesting themes that were explored very nicely and I simply adore the art and the character designs as a whole. Love your works, will be following for more.
Live, laugh, lesbian/LGBTQ+
Thank you, I'm glad the disasterous nature of their dynamic was appealing.
What a game. I knew I was gonna get something pretty good since I liked your previous title exploring some interesting themes, but this one explores themes that feel more relevant to me. The two protagonists are really compelling characters, and the art is just awesome.
Gonna follow your work for real now. This was unbelievably good.
Thank you, that's very kind. Glad you enjoyed it.
i loved this, it was a lot more reassuring than i expected based on the content warnings. i really liked millicent (she has some great expressions; love how she goes between being imposing and red-eyed and then she actually gets a little blushy in that last cg haha), and ember was an interesting protag. for somebody with no sense of self-preservation it felt kind of inspiring seeing her persevere despite Everything (also liked that moment where she managed to make millicent feel unsure of herself, even if it only lasted a little while).
love the art, the presentation, and the music choices were great too. i feel like you packed so much into a short wordcount and it was very emotionally resonant, i really enjoyed it!
Thank you very much Ebi, I'm humbled. I had fun writing Millicent and I'm glad she was enjoyable to read about...
HOTTT HOTTT HOTTT i loved it, millicent is a really compelling character and i adore the complexity of her showcased in the span of 11k words, ember, too, is an interesting character and so cute lol. like a disaster you cannot look away from--ember was engaging in that way. im a huge sucker for relationships where two people who seem really different actually have some commonality and i was definitely getting that vibe here. i also really like how emotionally evocative the writing was, you have a really good sense of word choice. i was looking forward to this one as soon as you started posting previews of the art and it turned out so good <3 !!
Thank you very much, I'm glad that aspect of their relationship came through.
btw, wanted to check—you cool with fanart?
of course
Oh this game is AMAZING! The artstyle and general vibes of the game compliment the writing perfectly, and I loved how the ending tied into the theme of symbiosis. Millicent's gonna be living in my head rent free for a long time.
Thank you. I'm glad Millicent had an impact.
This game was great and very real! Thank you for making it!
Thank you for reading, I'm glad.